The midnight blue train rushes past.Most of the passengers are asleep in the light red bed coved with six blankets each all with swirling patterns on them. but some of the younger passengers are still eating the big cold dinner before lights out.
They had been traveling for days maybe even months on the midnight blue train and did not know when the next stop would be. Suddenly as they approached the track a loud sharp snap came up a head of them ...
Hi Eliza.I like how you used lots of adjectives.It reminds me of a movie I have watched. Maybe next time you could write a bit more.
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